"Hot Chocolate my ass!" I told you you were going to sleep!
630am. Still up. Going to pack my things and walk to my math class. Sleep there and then go to class. Then to work and then the day is just beginning!
Thanks for the highligter. Its Kinda dead. should I throw it away?

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good start, but you will be spending the night working on your paper. i think since you have a strong thesis you will be fine on writing your paper. good luk.

that's right cookie you tell alice what's up. You are gonna have a long nite and it's gonna suck but i will be worth it you might want to work on your argument for you thesis

Can't say I saw this coming but it really looks good.

Cronk! Your thesis is lookin' gr8!! I like you how matched today too! Talk about.... aw crap. Actually I have no idea what else you can talk about. Looks like its going to be a long night for both of us but no worries! Don't get distracted and we'll both have fantastic papers tomorrow! Best in the class. (cough*cough)
Call me if you need help with anything! I'll be up all night but work from 845-11. Before or after that is all good!!
Peace ouT

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I LIKE YOUR THESIS JUST INCORPORATE MORE ETHOS IN YOUR AUDIENCE. YOU ALSO NEED TO FIND SOURCES THAT RELATE TO YOUR TOPIC AND NEED TO HAVE BETTER AUDIENCE INTERPRETATION. OTHER THAN THAT I LOVE YOUR CORRELATION.

I know you have had a rough time with writing your thesis, but I think it was pretty good! Good luck with your paper, I think it will be interesting!!!!

hey great presentation! however, your second sentence was really long.... really long. but you could shorten it up or make it into two sentences! easy fix! great job! but make it a little more clear about what you are comparing.

well, i think that you should be a little more prepared because THE PAPER IS DUE TOMORROW!!!!!!!!!! you say you have more peer reviewed sources so good. also, i think your thesis is too wide, break it down. lastly, you did not really discuss Creul intentions that much.  all i remember is Save Yourself.  good luck

  why am i not surprised that you are the one who will be talking about sex?  lol.  you have a good thesis and strong supporting sentences.  you are going to do excellent with this paper. 

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I think your thesis statement had some strong points in it.... I feel once you make your central arguement and get your peer reviewed resources, your paper will be good...Good presentation... Your paper has a lot of potential...

girl you need a lot of work make sure you put your points in your thesis

   Good luck tonight; I'll be doing the same thing! I think you're definitelly on the right track, and by comparing the song and the movie, you'll have your argument. Good job.

Is that a phallic symbol on the cover of cruel intentions?!  I love that song, you should know, i introduced you to it!!!!  I think your thesis is perfect.  Maybe you should talk about how Cruel Intentions is the exact reverse of Save Yourself.  Just a thought:)  GL

      Your thesis only discusses the deception and lies used by the men in general.  But what about the effect of the deception and lies utilized?  How do they affect the women?  How do they affect how the people using them are viewed by society.  Something to think about.

The thesis needs more "backbone" because it does not seem that strong. You need more strenghtening points to ensure that you will have a good paper. Good Luck