hana you did better than last time you told me about your thesis better but just need a little work

I really couldn't here you but from what I read it looks like you know what you are talking about.

I reall liked your thesis statement and the points your are trying to support...Besides the grammatical errors, your paper should be excellent...Good job and presentation....

   That was really good! Your book and movie are both different and interesting and the comparison is good as well. I think that the only thing that you would need to do would be to make the thesis a little more clear, but other than that, it was really good.

Thesis looks great!
Maybe you can talk abou t t how the mothers were affect ed in the your stories, sorry if this is poorly written , but my backspace doens't work .
can you talk about how the mothers were affected and how it may have been different if the men were alive and the women were killed?
Good Job!

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i can tell that you were well prepared, and you can tell that you really worked on your thesis. i am proud of you!!!! i know your paper is going to great and your sources were credible and peer reviewed.  good job.  the paper is due tomorrow so i know you will have a great paper!!! thank you!!!

     You are focusing on revenge and how the individual women take revenge on others that caused them pain and how this affects the people that they take revenge upon correct?  But what about what revenge does to the women who take revenge?  What does revenge do to them?  How do they go about with the revenge and how do those actions affect them?

Best thesis of em all as far as i have seen.  I really think that you can do a good job explaining your thesis using those sources.  I understand why you are using The Holy Bible as a source, for the most part it teaches mercy and forgiveness.  Just be careful not to preach in your paper.  Should be used as a Scientific document (as strange as that may sound) and not as a book of religeon.

  your thesis sounded pretty good, but i noticed there were several grammar mistakes.  other than that everything looked good and i think you will do great

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I liked how the two pieces are completely different but at the same time the whole process begins with the same action. The grammer has to be worked on but i could understand in the direction you were headed. Nice job on the presentation. It was concise and straight to the point. i enjoyed, keep up the good work.

YOUR TOPIC IS VERY NICE AND I ALSO READ MANY BOOKS BY ISABEL ALLENDE AND ALSO IT WAS VERY GOOD TO SEE THE ENTIRE STORY PLAYED TOGETHER. I LOVE YOUR THESIS AND THIS IDEA OF REVENGE AND ALSO THE WAY YOU INCORPORATE THEM TOGETHER! 

I think your topics are good. You thesis is very very good. I really don't know what to say to help you because I haven't read or watched that movie....

hey good job! ur thesis was very clear and i could easily find your argument! good job i bet ur paper is gonna rock.

this was really good! did you have 3 supporting points your your topic of revenge? you picked a good argument for these two books.  they are both represented well.  it was a good presentation! you did a good job! this will be an interesting paper and you will do excellent!