Wilson you have alot of thoughts hope they come through in your paper gl

you have done a great job it is good that you know what you want to talk about. i haven't read the boodk or watched the movie but i think you will be fine if you tie up your ideas and talk about how one leade is better than the other becouse of their leading style.

didn't get to hear you thesis because it was so long but it seems like you know what's up. Your agument is narrow talking about leadership i just do know how you plan on mixing the two. Hope all is good

didn't get to hear you thesis because it was so long but it seems like you know what's up. Your agument is narrow talking about leadership i just do know how you plan on mixing the two. Hope all is good

 I think you need to specify your thesis statement and the actual points your trying to argue and support them with your peer reviewed resources... I feel your presentation could have given a little more specifics into your research paper....Good though

Looks like you have a great start!
Be sure to tie everything together and talk about how one type of leader is better than the other. Give examples and try not to be biased while doing so. It might be hard but see if you can give scientific examples of why assertive leadership is better than the others!

Peace!

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  It's good that you know your book and movie so well; you won't constantly have to be looking back as you write your paper. But I would say to make a little clearer like Alice said, and hopefully your thesis will work.

  sounds good wilson, i think your presentation has been the best so far. 

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YOUR TOPIC IS KIND OF LIKE MINE I LIKE! BUT YOU SHOULD BEGIN TO USE YOUR THESIS TO BECOME THE CENTRAL POINT OF YOUR PAPER. I LKE THAT YOU FOUND KEY SOURCES JUST INCORPORATE THEM!

wilson, i really do not understand your thesis.  if you have so much, why did you not put it in your powerpoint presentation and your thesis can NOT be your entire paper.  i hope that you have a lot done for now because it is due tomorrow!!! good luck and it seems like you're all over the place with your ideas.

wilson! good job. 4 page thesis?? omg! u should have put it up there so we could see ur argument...but hope ur paper turns outwell!! good choices and interesting topic!

I think that your argument is going to very interesting.  I like how you are going to show how passive leaders and aggressive leaders act and then show where they have faults.  Then when you come in with how assertive leaders act, i think it will be a combination of passive and agressive (ha passive-agressive) leadership and where assertive leadership attempts to cover those flaws.  Good work, it should be an easy topic for you to write about.  Hopefully by figuring this out you can become a success and get your hot trophy wife :)  BTFU

I liked the way you formatted your presentation. with the given points you were able to explain yourself. you let me know that you knew exaclty what you were taling about.

Nice topics.... I am not exactly sure what your central argument was, so you need to clarify that in your paper. Good Luck Buddy!

i like how you did an outline approach. it was creative! however, i think you needed to put more down for your thesis because i'm not sure what you are trying to argue. when you were presenting your thesis slide, you mostly went through defining those three terms of leadership.  is that your main argument? it sounds like you really know your stories though and will do just fine!

      You said that your definitions come from your JROTC class.  Are you going to include the military aspect in the paper as well, other than the definitions provided.  This could possibly be a source.  How do military standards affect how learders and leadership roles are defined according to your definitions and categories of the types of leaders.