COLE, GREAT PRESENTATION! I AM PROUD OF YOU.  at the beginning of the year, you were so down on yourself, now you came up with a better thesis than a lot of us!!! I  think that your thesis should just be a little more specific.  (don't use it) and DON'T USE "YOU". you know alice will beat YOU!!! anyway, just get some good peer reviewed sources and  you will be on your way!!!

you have got an interesting topic. you just need to get more related movie as Alice said. i haven't watched your movie but trust me it need to be exactly what you want to talk about. work on it a little more and you will be finr.

Does Revenge drive Society?
name some examples in history of tyranny and how it can be good and bad for society to start over and regenerate.
things need beginnings and all things must come to an end.

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-boiler up-

  well i think yours sounded like one of the best ones yet...tear the shit up

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WELL I THINK YOUR THESIS IS VERY CLEAR BUT YOU SHOULD HAVE MORE DETAILED EXPLANATION ON WHAT TOPICS ARE BEING COMPARED AND WHAT YOU ARE COMPARING. IT IS VERY GOOD ON BETRAYEL AND OTHER TOPICS BUT THAT IS A VERY OPEN SUBJECT. TRY TO NARROW IT DOWN.

COLE YOU HAVE SOME GOOD POINTS BUT YOU NEED TO ELIBORATE ON YOUR THESIS JUST A LITTLE MORE

I think you have a very good thesis, and you must have spent a lot of time thinking about it. The only thing you need to include is your specific argument, but other than that.... GOOD JOB!

    I think what you chose to compare is are really interesting and you could get some really good stuff. All you really need to do is think about it somemore and get it make it firmer. Good job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

      Your thesis is about loyalty and betrayal and how they are shown in each work.  How about, as one of your points, talk about the historical difference.  How do loyalty/betrayal compare from the play written in the 1500's or so to the movie made in 2000.  What do you think.

Well written thesis.  I think that you could compare the loyalty in Gladiator and the Betrayal in Caeser.  I like the idea, it's almost good vs. evil....mmm comparison....so good :P

It looks you had a really good thesis but you should be more confident in your topic.

cole!! yeah u can thank me for helpin u with ur thesis....unless its gonna get ua bad grade then u kno, i dont need any thank you's..lol. um no but good points, be  alil more specific..but for makin it up like 2 hours b4 class it was damn good.  good job!

i think maybe you should make more references to the stories in your thesis. you generalize how "you" would feel or how "you" are... turn them into how the actual movie and play are. other than that i think you are focused...