I really think you are an excellent track, but I feel you have to find another film that conveys the things you are trying to compare more accuratley... You idea is very good and once you state your three supporting facts and find the peer reviewed sources supporting your topic, you paper will be very good. Like your presentation...

Why is Mary in this picture?? lol any way to your  thesis.  i also feel that it has a little work to do to be complete.  if you put a lot of thought into it you will have the perfect paper.  i think you will not have a problem coming up with 8-10  pages and get more peer reviewed sources......

can you talk about how people actually think like this in real life towards Learning Disabled Kids?
thesis needs work ; obviously ; just say it, dont' be all technical.

down with society.

-wks-
-boiler up-

You are trying to do two completly different things which is going to be tough but at least you have the balls to do it. Your thesis needs work.

You are trying to do two completly different things which is going to be tough but at least you have the balls to do it. Your thesis needs work.

  not too bad...thesis just needs a little work tho.  other than that it sounds good

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JUST WORK ON YOUR THESIS AND YOU SHOULD HAVE SOME IDEA ABOUT YOUR PAPER AND HOW TO BRING OUT THE REST OF YOUR POINTS

It seems thta you know were you are going and I think focusing on change is good.

   I definitely think that you have a really good idea, and it should be interesting to see what you come up with. All  you have to do is get two things to compare that make your point really easy to see. I think you may be able to find it in the movie that you chose, but if not, it shouldn't be too hard to find another movie.

I think you did a good job. I haven't read or watched either of those so I don't know what to say. I think maybe you need to think a little more about what your main argument is going to be.

i don't think you should start your paragraph with a question... also some of your sentences did not make sense.... but you knew that because you said that out loud! haha! well just straighten it up a bit and you'll be good to go!

Thesis is questions?  Is there any way to reword it and make it seem authoritative.  I am not convinced by your arguement when you are asking me how they are similar and different.

I NEVER HAVE READ THE STORIES AND I HOPE THAT YOU EXPLAIN THEM VERY WELL. THE TOPICS SEEM TO HOLD A GREAT BOND THAT EVERYDAY SOCIETY FACES TO GO BY. I ALSO FEEL THAT NO MATTER WHAT HAPPENS THE TWO STORIES HSOULD ALWAYS HAVE A COMMON GROUND THAT TYOU BASE THEIR COMPARISON ON. OTHERWISE IT IT VERY OOD BUT JUST BETTER EXPLAIN YOU THESIS, WHAT ARE YOU TRYING TO FIND? WHAT ARE ARE YOU COMPARING? GREAT!

good job....i was a little confused by ur thesis,...i'm not sure i know what ur going to talk about so maybe be a little more specific??? but otherwise good job u were well prepared..!!

     You talked a little about I Am Sam and incorporating that into your paper.  What are you going to use from that movie?  What about talking about the perspectives of the mentally challenged and how they view the world around them.  This could possibly be one of your supporting topics.