EVERYONE IS HAVING PROBLEMS WITH THIER THESIS JUST WORK ON IT ALITTLE MORE AND YOU SHOULD DO GOOD ON THE PAPER

i like the idea that you are comparing these two literary peices because, although they appear to be the same storty, they are two TOTALLY different stories!!!!! i think that your thesis needs a little work but i agree that you are on the right track.  However, do you think that you will have 8-10 pages and i really think you should include the religious aspect because it has a lot to do with the stories!!! GOOD JOB SWEETIE~~

  it sounded pretty good...my only suggestion would be to work on your thesis a little. 

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your thesis is a bit scattered but there are many good ideas. This could turn out to be a fanatstic paper. You need to focus your ideas and narrow them down a little bit.

talk about the time period and how things were different back in the day -
Touch on religious themes but be sure not to be biased.
if the names are interesting and go with the story, include them!
talk about Dante's Inferno or the Divine Comedy and the seven layers of Hell!
good stuff

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I enjoyed how you have all the different perspectives and how you can tie that into th paper. The thesis looked strong and you had many points that are going to beack you up throughout the paper.

     The endings are your central point correct?  Are you only going to focus on the difference of the age groups each is meant for?  What about society and how it affects the story.  You could also discuss how these works reflect on society and whether they defefine society or break it down and destroy it.

your start of your thesis was good but the focal point of same age in different times is the way to go.

sara, you did a good job. i love the cartoon the little mermaid. i haven't read the old version but i think you are in the right struck. and it will be more interesting if you talk about the religiouse asspect of it too. that will help you with getting more to sy on your paper.  your thesis is clearly stated to me. great job 

I LOVED YOUR TOPIC AND WISH THAT YOU COULD EXPLAIN MORE IN YOUR PAPER ABOUT THE DIFFERENCES BETWEEN THE TWO STORIES. I FEEL THAT THIS TOPIC MIGHT BE VERY HARD TO CONTROL THE MAIN POINTS BECAUSE THEY HAVE TYHE SAME PLOT MEANING. I DO HOWEVER LIKE THE WAY YOU FOUND THE DISTINGUISHING POINT.

I think you should change how you are introducing the paragraph... don't start out with "At first though" because you don't compare it to a second thought.  you go on with your point and don't second guess what you thought at first.  and maybe try to make clear what you are comparing... i didn't understand the 3 points that you were supporting....

   I think that it is interesting that you are doing a book and a movie of  the same story; I think you could find a lot on that. You need to organize it a little more, but other than that, I think you are right on track! Gooood job.

I really like you topic... I think once your thesis is more specifc and you actually compare the different apsects of the book from the past to the present, your paper can be very good. Also, try to make the various connections Alice was talking about and your paper will be right on the money..Liked your presentation.

 i like ur topic!!! i think ur thesis could be a little stronger perhaps use more descriptive words detailing ur thesis giving it a stronger lead in to ur paper...but otherwise, awesome!!!

I've read H.C. Andersens version.  And i like the fact that you mentioned the endings being drasitcally different.  I think you should talk about them.  Doesn't she kill herself in the end of the short story?  So sad...