I love this book, and i love this movie!  I like how you are comparing the way the world is seen through "simpler" eyes.  I think it makes for a very interesting argument. 

  well i wasnt there to see yours, but from what i heard in previous classes and the conference group...you seem to have a pretty good idea what you are going to be doing.  i think i would probably have a hard time comparing these two works...but then again i have never been good at this type of thing.  i cant comment on your power point..obviously..but good luck with your paper....kick some ass.

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your thesis was well put together however, i feel that your thesis did have some flaws,  i think that you should find your three major supporting points that you want to discuss and eloborate on them.. also, i think you should really focus on that time period part for both stories because they are both happening in two different yet powerful times in our nations history.

the thesis was good except i would completly get rid of the last sentence. Your sources were peer reviewed so no worries there keep up the good work.

I think you made a great point in your thesis and I would have never thought about that. I think you chose very different subjects and brought them together in a way that will be interesting.

     For your thesis you are focusing on the point of views that each work contains.  Are you going to include a discussion on age and how their experiences differ?  Scout is young and still has not experienced the cruelty of the world.  Forrest on the other hand has been in a war and experienced death.  Thought they have similar points of view, each has different experiences of life and thus different perspectives of life.

I really enjoyed your presentation.... I think in your paper you should really talk about this "simpleness" and the significanace in tellin the story from this perspective....Good presentation

great thesis! that was wonderful with the wording and all! just the last sentence like alice said. drop it off or take the generalization out.  it was your opinion and you cannot end a paper that way. you have to come off strong girl! and also be sure to make clear what you are comparing with them... because i am not sure what the three supporting points were. but good job!

I like your thesis, and i think you can keep your last sentence with a different transition instead of it is facilitating. But it is good. nice job. 

Amy!!! super awesome job! i would change ur last sentence tho...ya kno witht the whole preposition thing cuz it makes ur thesis sound imcomplete...but otherwise, awesome job i bet ur paper's gonna rock! p.s.--ur comparing disease to waht? i got a lil confused...maybe clarify? or possibly not listen to me bcuz i had it on here but i didnt post the comment so now i forgot...lol. good job !! lol. 

Amy , great job . be sure to focus on your audience and give examples from the time period.
Fix up your thesis a lil' bit and I think you will have a great paper!

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                 I love your topic and that I love Forrest Gump I know no matter what it will work. I also believe that your focus is very good but I think that it is very detailed but the topic seems kind of broad. Make sure that everything that you say in your thesis connects to the rest of your paper.