well i cant really say much b/c i wasnt in class friday and you arent in my confrence group...but i think you will do good writing this paper...in previous classes tho you sound like you have the determination to do well.  blow alice away with ur awesome paper.

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since Alice basically wants us to down each presentation.......... I think that your thesis needs work.  just like mine.  i think you have the sources that you need and this paper can be very good becasue you have a very powerful topic, you just have to do a lot of research and put a lot into the paper to make it the best!!!!!!!!!!

Need to narrow down the thesis it is to broad as of right now but I have confidence that you will improve. 

I think your presentation was good. You have a strong point in your thesis, although Alice might not  completely agree with what you are trying to prove. I think you can make a really good point with this.

did a good job work on thesis and you will excel throughout the rest of the paper great presentation

   I thought you did a good job, but I think your thesis was a little bit broad. Are you going to talk about all that stuff like race, sex, and I can't remember what else? It did seem like you were really into your topic, so I think your paper should be really good!

i think that your presentation was well thought out. just make sure you know what you are arguing in the paper. your thesis is well developed, but maybe you could clear up exactly what the difference is between discrimination and social construction.

Even though the book and movie are based in the city I think that you should include country life as well.  What about their perspective?  Is it different than the city?  Is it more or less accepted?  These are just some of the things to be considered.

super sweet! i like ur thesis. seems strong but not too detailed or scattered like u thought at conference. u should stick with that its very good. if u want to eleborate, do so in the paper cuz i think its good the way it is!! good job!

I really love your topic and can't wait to read your paper. The reason being you have first hand experience on your subject area.. Once your thesis is more specific, I think your paper will be awsome.. Good presentation

there is a part in your thesis that says "seeking for acceptance"

Perhaps you could change the wording of it to "seeking acceptance" or searching for acceptance"? When you read this part aloud it kind of sounded funky.

Other than that it sounds fantastic and I look forward to your final paper!
Good Luck!

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your thesis looks perfect to me. you have it clearly explained and when you prove what you have in your thesis in your paper it will be more clear and easy to understand. i love your presentation too. i am pround of you that you already read your outside sourceses.

good job.