Hey M. i like you thesis. i think you have an interesting topic and if you work on it a little bit more you will be fine. you have done a great job so far. this assighnment is very challenging so i can understand what you had to go through to get where you get.

Hey by the way, thanks for your help.

I was not sure on how you were going to tie the the two pieces of literature together but i guess with a little help from the class it should allow to continue withthe paper. I'm sorry i had no ideas but those who did know the story behind each one did give wnough input. good luck on the rest of your paper.

Using the women's point-of-view is pretty good for the thesis.  However, if you decide not to go with it think about the disease factor and the struggles that each of the couples go throught.  Also, the next time you write a thesis statement, include A Walk to Remember in it, a lot more than you did in the thesis statement you presented : ).   Talk to ya later.

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Woman's point of View? Maybe include the man's point of view if you need to make it into 8-10 pages and can't quite make it.
Give background to each of your stories.
Mandy Moore kinda sucks ,but she's hott so w/e..
Talk about how the women in the stories are both taken away either emotionally/mentally or physically.
Include personal experiences.

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   It was a little confusing, but I think you realized that with your whole thesis and everything. Also, I think that if you focused a little on the trauma thing, there would be a lot of research available, but you don't have to if you don't want to:)

super sweet. so u gonna take my idea? i think u should use my idea!!! u know the fact that  they were both taken away from their loves, in a sense just in different ways. hope it all works out! thanx for the jsort!!!

I LOVE YOUR TOPIC, IT IS VERY GOOD AND LOVELY! I LOVED HOW YOU INCORPORTATED EXPIRENCE WITH THE TOPICS. I LOVED THE THESIS AND I AM HAPPY YOU SHOWED THE CLASS WHERE TO FIND THE PEER REVIEWS. i LOVE THE WAY THAT THE RELATIONSHIPS ARE GOING TO BE ARGUED FROM BOTH PERSPECTIVES, ALL THE CHARACTERS, MEN AND WOMEN BECAUSE THEY SHOW DIFFERENT VIEW POINTS. JUST CLEARLY STATE WHAT YOU ARE GOING TO FIND!  

great job misha work on your thesis just a little more maybe just pick 3 main point instead of going all over the place then you will have a good thesis

  well...to be honest i had a difficult time seeing what your thesis was.  it was a little jumbled up and ....im confused.  i think you'll work it all out..but i dont think i would be able to lol

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It lacked a bit but it was a lot better than mine.

I would really like to read your paper when its done if that is possible.  The idea interests me. 

you know what you want out of your paper, so just go with it! you weren't too prepared with your thesis but you have direction now after presenting. get to it girl! it's going to be good just listen to your peers. it sounds like you found amazing sources! that's great! your paper will be good!

   Very good! There's no doubt that you will have enough info for 8 pages and I'm jealous!! I thought that your power point was very good. I also liked the connection you made between the book and the song. I can't think of anything that was wrong with it, so good job.

your thesis needs work but cronk saved your ass so it's all good. i don't think you will have a problem writing 8 pages.