Merry i liked your thesis, it is like you are well prepared. and you have a very interesting topic. i hope you will have a lot to say about your topic. your are doning a good job and good luck on your paper.

Your presentation was prepared.  i think your theis was constructed well and i really love that song!!! As long as your paper is structed and well put together, you should be fine!!!!!!!!!

   You did a really good job; there's no doubt that you'll have enough info for 8 pages! It looks like you really thought it out. Good job!

very concise.  I like that you have a clear view of what you want to do.

good presentation !!
Wish I could find soureces that were that good!
Your paper sounds really directed and focused
I think it will be a great finished product!

Be sure to visit the writing lab!!

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I thought I would tell myself I thought my presentation was good...U need to encourage yourself sometimes!!!!

   Its very clear what you are going to do and how you are going to go about this paper.  plus....I SAW YOU ON TV!!!!  ....back to the power point tho....you thesis was a lot better than mine...i know thats not saying a whole lot...but still.  i dont know what else to say..it was great

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i THINK YOU DID A REALLY GOOD JOB AND I LOVE THE PRIMARY SOURCES THAT YOU OBATINED. I LOVED HOW YOU ARE COMPARING ALMOST TWO DIFFERENT MEDIAS THAT HAVE THE SAME IMPASCT IN SOCIETY. I ALSO THINK THAT YOUR THESIS SHOULD CONFIRM YOUR MAIN POINTS. GREAT!

I think that you had a pretty down pat thesis, short and concise.  I don't understand why you would need to put examples in the thesis when that is what the body paragraphs are for.  you got great sources as well, from journals that are peer reviewed.  Good job and according to Alice's standards.

It seems that you already know were you are going.

good job mary it seem like you have a clear point on what you want to talk about in your paper gl

Mary you sound like you know exactly what you are talking about and that you are well prepared to write this paper.  You thesis was very well written.

great job with your presentation. the music and colors on the power-point made everyone pay more attention to it! i can tell that this is something that you are very passionate about and sure your paper will be great! just be sure to write about exactly what is it that you want to get across with the differences of these two pieces.  give good examples and be sure to cite well credible sources.

good job mary. ur thesis seemed pretty focused and you know what you want to write your paper about. way to be prepared! good job girl.

Very concise and straight to the point. You explained your thesis very well and i easily understood the direction in which  your paper is headed. Keep up the good work.