Gibson on The Wizard of Oz and Wicked

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I ENJOYED IT!!!
I think that your presentation was very prepared!!! I understood you thesis but i still think that it needs improvement. you should have more explanation of every sentence. i feel that you will show it on your paper. if you need any help, i am willing!!! :-)
GOOD!
YOUR PRESENTATION HAD GOOD POINTS! I LOVE HOW YOU INCORPORTAED TOPICS TOGETHER THAT HAVE INFLUENCES ON EVERYDAY LIFE. i LOVE YOUR THESIS EXPLAINS ALOT ABOUT WHAT YOUR TALKING ABOUT. GOOD! BUT I NOTHING GRABS MY ATTENTION RIGHT AWAY, I DO NOT SEE THE SOMPARISON CLEARLY, BUT MAYBE THAT IS ME!
Gibson! Not too bad buddy!!
Gibson!
Not too bad buddy!! ~ I stil haven't gotten the chance to see wicked, but i really hope i get to sometime in the near future. Maybe give some good background about the play for those of us who haven't seen it.
Be sure to really get into the reversal of roles in the play and movie and maybe find other movies or instances when there is a role reversal?
I would say to give specific examples of good and evil, but then that kind of leads in to POV's and how something that is bad to one person might not necessarily be bad to another person.
You could Discuss how some people might think the Wicked witch is evil no matter what she does and maybe her role can't truely be reversed.
Also ; maybe include some mythology in there?
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Wicked Presentation
I think your presentation was very good....Once u make your thesis statement more detailed about what actually you will be arguing, It would be an excellent paper....U get an "A" as usual???
heyyy gibson you did a good
heyyy gibson you did a good job to it seem like you have a good point to say in your paper keep up the good work
On Gibson
Concise thesis. I do think that good vs. evil is very much personal experienced based. You should try to incorporate the perspective of the two main characters. Dorothy grows up in Kansas the "happy place" with parents who are obviously very very very very very very very very pompous. They would never dream of saying the fuck word. Where as in wicked, you see it from a much different perspective and the people around the witch are very not prim and proper. I can't remember but is wicked set in the same time? Maybe mention something about the dialogue of the times. How people (audience) are led to believe that Glenda is good and West witch is bad in Wisard of Oz (again relating to perspective). Other than that...yeah...great!
presintation
I thought your power point presintation was really good and adding the webster dictonary description of the words was a nice touch. I think it will be important to add the definitions of the words in latin.
cole's two cents
Gibson i think that you had a well written thesis and were very prepared in your presentation. I think that you will do a kick ass job on your presentation.
Nice job
Great job. I never saw the play but i can understand at least how you will tie that into the movie.
money maker
Pretty good. You seem to be headed in a good direction and your power point reflected that.
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Amy's Comment
I thought that it was clear that you thought about it a lot, and understood the connections between the two. You did a good job, but I thought that maybe you could have been a little clearer in the thesis.
nice power-point!
your presentation was so great! i loved how you kept our attention with the great looks of the power-point. the curtain idea was great since they were both musicals and all. your thesis was well thought out. great job! you are going to have to really get through to the audience what the difference between good and evil is since the roles are reversed in the two plays. the newspaper sources aren't too reliable, so just be sure to include more reliable sources. i'm sure your paper will be great!
gibson awesome job....i was
gibson awesome job....i was little confused about your thesis, i mean its friggin awesome and everything but the wording could be slightly different. make it more focused on what your paper is going to be about...and detailed as it was, it seemed slightly vague..but overall, awesome job!!!

Hana's comment
You have done a great job on your presentation and i think you have a good thesis. it will be great if you work on your thesis to make it clear. i don't have any idea about the two stories but is looks good so far. great job.